Alcafus - Vol. 3 Ch. 13 - Omen

I can practically hear the incoming rant on how cafus are nothing more than tools to be used.
 
"Now that you learned your lesson"

This fucking mistake
This fucking mistake right there
 
Does this chap really end with that "stop doing things that make cafus sad" phrase? Not even a better one with a continue or a third person narrator commenting? That's anti-climatic

Anyway....just kill the mad man so that you don't need to just hope he'll stop...that way you'll be 100% sure lol
Btw, thank for picking this up
 
The hell lesson did he learn? He got knocked over once?

Be a lot less obvious when you're harming someone?

Maybe you should just kill him, bro.
 
It always works when you give a good, stern lecture to a murderous psycho. That will set him on the righteous path and rid him of his wicked ways for sure.
 
This trope is fucking stupid. Who in their right minds tries to teach some random murderer who was literally just trying to kill them the error of their ways instead of just killing them or having them arrested? Nobody acts like this, and it's not even desireable that people do because what is going to happen next is that this degenerate is going to continue his murder spree, and eventually come for the MC. Just stop writing like this.
 
Okay, but imagine if the moment they woke up, not only would they suddenly and rappidly begin aging, but they'd all be pregnant from what he did to them.

I think Franken Fran as fucked me up.
 
"Please stop doing things that make cafus sad"
Bro I think that's REALLY downplaying what the fuck mr. stonemason did LMFAO
 
@Kaarme @BLN123 @AnonymousWeeaboo
This trope is fucking stupid. Who in their right minds tries to teach some random murderer who was literally just trying to kill them the error of their ways instead of just killing them or having them arrested? Nobody acts like this, and it's not even desireable that people do because what is going to happen next is that this degenerate is going to continue his murder spree, and eventually come for the MC. Just stop writing like this.

Because your common sense does not apply to their world: It is already established in the beginning that Cafus are not considered to have human rights, but rather pets. Would you go John Wick on the butcher shop because they are killing pigs and cows every day? Would you go into a person's home and kill them for mounting taxidermy deer heads (which in this case is what I'd expect to be the equivalent of the petrified Cafus) on the wall? Even in the modern world, animal rights activists don't go around shooting those "murderers", but rather limit their actions to protests, because otherwise, they'd be committing terrorism or murder themselves.

The very fact that the protagonist didn't get shot for trespassing and destruction of property is already a testament to the plot armor he have.
 

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