Am I Your Daughter? - Ch. 35

For cases like this I honestly just want them to speed up so she can reunite with her dad.
 
That seems like a dumb thing to point out in front of so many people. Even if they are your followers wouldn't bad rumors start up about her personality?
 
This is why I hate reading something like this....
This make my psychopath side gone crazy
......wait.....
WHY THE HELL I WRITE THIS !?!?
 
She has been planning this whole escape for the length of the entire chapter. We're shown she gathers bits of food so she can last a couple of days outside, gets a lamp so she can see, is learning the timing of the guard change, trying to learn the layout of the mansion, and so on. And then she throws all that away and risks having her freedom curtailed by trying to escape in the middle of a party when loads of people are around? The whole buildup of the chapter was wasted in an impulse.
 

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