Amachin wa Jishou ♂ - Vol. 2 Ch. 9 - Excavation ♂

Excellent. Another addition to the fold. But real talk being princess carried like that would melt anyone's heart.
 
On page 9 he refers to Amachin as "herself" and "her" and soon after refers to him as "he" and "his", was this intentional?

Never fond of new characters being added really, shall see.

Thanks for the chapter.
 
"If XXX kun does XXXX to me... I will become a girl"
yeah I've read lots of doujins with this line when it comes to crossdressing characters.... but they usually have an ahegao face hmmmm.jpg
 
The translation is serviceable overall, a few awkward sentences here and there, but no major issues I noticed. It was easy enough to self correct where things weren't ideal. The only thing I'd really point out for the future is consistency in capitalizing I/I'm, you were pretty all over the place in that regard.
 

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