Apocalyptic Super System - Ch. 22

good move, i respect that. ungrateful people who dont understand the situation only learn when by first hand experience.
 
How fucking dumb lol, he didn't make sure the prisoners were secure and now he's blaming it on the female chairman instead of his own dumbass.

The mark of a bad story is always when the author makes the characters as dumb or smart as he needs them to be for whatever situation he's currently writing, and this has that shit stench all over it.
 
Woman Chairman steals from them after being rescued from being raped. Then totally fucks up keeping her rapists imprisoned. Then forces one of the 3 rescuers [a school girl for christ sakes] in a situation where they die saving her from being raped.... again.

Fuck that Thot ! Even the mostly useless school girl proved to be better than the Chairman.
 

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