Another Pure Succ love story, this is almost as good as Gyaru love stories
boag Joined Feb 2, 2018 Messages 5,716 Nov 10, 2019 #21 Another Pure Succ love story, this is almost as good as Gyaru love stories
Ghost_Cheetah Joined Sep 8, 2019 Messages 8 Nov 10, 2019 #23 Good work WhoSainT. Thanks for translating!
BCS Joined Jan 31, 2018 Messages 5,173 Nov 10, 2019 #24 Crap MMC, girl falls in love with boy because muh kindness, "I don't stand out" she says as a cute JK with a huge rack... ugh
Crap MMC, girl falls in love with boy because muh kindness, "I don't stand out" she says as a cute JK with a huge rack... ugh
AbuHajaar Joined Jan 18, 2018 Messages 6,813 Nov 11, 2019 #25 I've read enough doujins to know where this is going
Mahck Joined Nov 14, 2018 Messages 54 Nov 17, 2019 #27 Pretty decent translation, a bit stiff but very good for a first try, and you nailed it with fonts and typesetting, you should keep doing it.
Pretty decent translation, a bit stiff but very good for a first try, and you nailed it with fonts and typesetting, you should keep doing it.
N Naeddyr Joined Feb 7, 2018 Messages 116 Jan 15, 2020 #28 Besides a couple of times you missed a word in a short sentence (where it's more easily noticed) I didn't notice the translation at all which is basically what you should aspire to.
Besides a couple of times you missed a word in a short sentence (where it's more easily noticed) I didn't notice the translation at all which is basically what you should aspire to.
