Ato de Shimai Masu. - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

[MangaDex]

 

[GoggledAnon]

p15
>Chii-chan at home...
[I just didn't write anything] about Chii-chan at home...

 

[Ninjaman20]

edited, thanks

 

[MooPoint]

@Ninjaman20 Thank you for scanlating this. Shoujo Ai between sisters seem quite rare.

Just a minor English suggestion:

...Anyway, however she is I love chii-chan all the same

It just sounds... weird. It would probably be better worded as just:

...Well, I love all of chii-chan all the same

 

[GoggledAnon]

@moopoint I think all it needs is a comma between is and I
"however she is, I love Chii-chan all the same"

 

[MooPoint]

@GoggledAnon I thought the same too, but that is still very non-colloquial in (at least American) English.

If you want to get into the actual Japanese... I would think まぁ is closer defined as "wellll" in this context and どっちのちいちゃんも is "which(ever) chiichan".

 

[Ninjaman20]

@MooPoint Ah yeah I agree, I think that sounds better. Thanks

I'll edit in a couple hours once i get out of bed

 

[CoolOtamegane]

@Ninjaman20, Please continue this series, I'd like freshes my rotten eyes from other dumbs manga
Here my suggestion : Please take a Trusted proofreader and QC to correct a minor details.

 

[MooPoint]

@CoolOtamegane offtopic but are you aware that the new Oniichan wa Oshimai has already been translated?

 

[Ninjaman20]

@CoolOtamegane yeah I definitely plan on continuing it and I'll try to find someone to check over it

 

[CoolOtamegane]

@MooPoint, OH CRAP!!!
Thanks for reminder I totally forgot total date.
Strange, usually my friend pm me

 

[red_bean_casserole]

Kinda reminds me of Watashi ni Tenshi ga Maiorita.

 

[darkmaster006]

Lovely! Will this be continued? I hope so!

 

[KipTheGamer]

Nice.