Automaton - Vol. 2 Ch. 5 - Thunder

So many weird things happening in this chapter.

I like how the girl says it's obvious what's to like about Mr. Plain Protagonist Whose Name I Legit Forgot.

"Hel-LO? I automatically love people who give me candy. Didn't I tell you how I met my parents?"
 
This guy never heard of biohazard? Touching or getting close of something like that is probably not wise.
 
Try to work on your sound effects, a lot of them were bizarre or just plain wrong.
 
@Duralumin Sorry, that is from my translator. If one is missing, I tend to look it up on the guides myself, so maybe those are the ones you're pointing to as wrong. Me personally, typesetting them from not knowing the language, none of them seem so far off that it eliminates the point of the action. Feel free to message me directly here or on Discord with examples and I'll be more cognizant of them in the future as I'm typesetting!
 

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