Beware the Villainess!

@podi125 I just feel like to an extent there’s too much of a power difference considering she’s his master. I much prefer her banter with yuri
 
@MRain I think she handled trashing on the prince pretty well at the end of the festival, but yeah the way she was beating him wasn't anything overtly clever. Tho tbf it doesn't take much effort to shit on a shitbin.

@FrickinGay I think he is going to get his own character development arc when they crush the werewolf boy. By that point, I think he's going to be a lot less formal with her. He's at most been a bit cheeky here and there but yeah I see what your saying. I do like the banter between her and Yuri a lot too.
 
Haa my blood pressure...im not joking, call me kid whatever..my blood pressure, i just wanna choke those guys, they are so annoying holy sht. I wish the whole plot will come together soon cause rn, i really cant stand reading all those stupid things that they did to the villainess. I think 44 chapter is enough nonsense (dont mean to sound rude at all, it's just my blood pressure...haaaa)
 
Melissa is hilarious, I literally cannot!!! I love how she prides herself on knowing where she stands as a Villainess. She knows she's not going to just become a saint, but she also knows that she's not going to be totally cruel. I swear Jake that little twat is surely gonna get what's coming to him AHAHAHAH. RUN JAKE RUN!!
 
The pacing is a little frustrating and I say this as a novel reader. This pacing does not fit this medium. Some of these chapters can be compressed into one and it would still not damage the story. So many panels used only to make silly jokes or to let our MC rants. It was only funny the first time. 7/10, closer to a 6 than an 8.
 
What a psycho, he's half beast too, tsk tsk tsk, what a bunch of creeps, I'm sad for Yuri, though I'm glad she met Melissa and Nine and Yona, also she has a great family that loves and protects her too so yup, also she's obviously strong enough today destroy all those disgusting and filthy things, anyway, thanks for that amazing roast of that pseudo-prince and that stalker !!
 
II take my previous comment back. This is beyond frustrating. I only got through 20 chapters by skipping dialogues. There are so many ranting and unnecessary lines in here that it might as well be a teenager's diary. 6/10, closer to a 7 than a 5.
 
I get so excited everytime this updates, I just know it'll be a blast!! This time (ch 45) the peak was definitely
Yuri telling Jake how much of stalker he is lol. So cathartic. Really hope he got that shit in his head now, he's been so frustratingly dense up until now, completely disregarding everything Melissa says.
 

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