Boku no Futatsu no Tsubasa

“Toshiki Yui turns a hentai fetish into the plot hook“ - I love how this somewhat makes it sound like it’s not something the author does in every single of his works.
 
lol this is the manga where my fetish for futa came from. thanks I guess
 
Wow, that ending was bad... This truth about Mako-chan felt so out of place... it was sad because the manga would be so much better if it was just the develope of the romance between Mako-chan and Hiromi... Even that felt bitter in the end.
 
Wow. I was hoping Mako and Hiromi would end up together but the story didn't flow together that well. I never really sensed Hiromi was in love with Mako or the other way around so for her to show up after leaving so abruptly like that, it just didn't feel like the story was leading that way. If the author maybe had more time to work the story, the ending could have been better. I'm glad they ended up together and I'm mad at how stupid Mako was. Literally just sleeping with anyone who would let her and dating everyone. Not thinking about people's feelings sometimes. She's a really terrible character honestly.
 
Quite a ride but unfortunately the cast is rather unlikable and wow. Where was ANY of the romantic build-up to that ending? Most of these characters (especially our futanari deuteragonist and that trashbag Kei) can be summed up as simple cum-brains with only sex on the mind outside of the 1% of pages they exist in where life or death drama takes place.

I'm glad this is another rare non h-doujin piece of futanari literature that exists (pretty old, being serialized from 2002 - 2005) but damn is it ever inferior to the handful of ones that have been released since.
 

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