Can't Defy The Lonely Girl - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

[Ekfreet]

Plot: 6
Execution: 7.5
Potential: 7.5

Not bad.

 

[Babydel]

The editing is exceedingly good.

Thank you very much.

 

[CyanHide]

Blackmail and coercion, the manga, but it’s a win/unsure/win situation

 

[marianolinx]

Honda-san no baka!!!!!

 

[Sarsak]

Are teachers in Japan only allowed to write a few rec letters or something?

 

[Syapaaye]

This just an ntr doujin, but instead of ugly bastard teacher, we got cute gay gal.

 

[Pachka84]

Another lame poorly written story about an emotionally weak dark-haired girl who gets molested by a light-haired girl. Sub-par in every way and far from worth the trouble of translation.

 

[Anomander]

> "I main sniper"

Fachkin' spawn campers.

 

[chris_dftba]

Man, this manga had some stellar cleaning, if I do say so myself.

 

[shittycoolusername69]

This is incredibly bland. Not a single scene with any wit or emotion (even the nicely drawn kiss is void of any meaning), we just go through a checklist of tropes.

Nice editing though.

 

[G-man672]

@Pachka84 Wait... I thought your issue with these types of manga was the light-haired girl always being happy and energetic and the dark-haired girl being angsty and emotional.

In this story, the dark-haired girl does have some internal conflict, but she's still driven to fix her own flaws and seems to have a friendly and at times sarcastic personality. The light-haired girl, on the other hand, is a recluse who's very blunt and unfeeling towards the MC so far. If she does have feelings for the MC, she clearly doesn't understand how to communicate them in a healthy or effective way.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but all of that seems to go against your usual distaste for character archetypes, based on hair color of all things. If you're going to make stupid critiques, at least be consistent about them.

 

[VietJustin]

yo this is pog

 

[indoeskrim]

not great, not terrible

 

[Marshall]

that's a pretty good payback, i think

 

[shittycoolusername69]

>Now all we need is a confirmation that the MC is a brocon

epic weeaboo moment

 

[Yourself]

Cute and yuripilled

 

[BCS]

>blackmail

I sleep

>sexual assault

I sleep

>I main sniper in FPS games

REAL SHIT

 

[NinjaGoemon]

@G-man672 At this point I'm pretty sure that person just hates girl's love manga because they're at EVERY SINGLE ONE with the same junk. Just ignore 'em.

 

[JaHommaPelaa]

>I main sniper
Possibly the most disgusting thing I've read entire year.

 

[Ibri]

Creepy. (also pretty weak blackmail material) I mean I know it will probably go that she had a longtime crush on her and MC will probably return the feelings quickly. But that doesn't make it a non creepy dynamic.

About Pachka84 i just used the block function at some point because it always the same stuff.