Children - Vol. 2 Ch. 13 - The Children

"The axes in this chapter are telling me something but I can't seem to put my finger on it."
-Eonlars
 
That ending was rushed as hell

MC's turn was too quick

This bitch should have been dead


At least the two second-best girls were alive, and I hope MC got reformed

Edit: Nope, MC's fucking dead. I still can't fucking believe he was the one actually tied to this shit, because that opens so many plot holes as I outlined earlier.

I hope he can be a good dad for Mirai in heaven at least.
 
The story sure could have a bit more chapters to develop better, but if you ask me it was either driving Mc crazy or he would have a dark past as well. The ones that survived were the best ones because out of the cucu nest that was that place they were the ones that t had "common sense". The only think I didn't like was the head teacher surviving. As all the "adults" she should have died. Well that's my opinion, it was short but I liked this crazy story
 
was thi axed? everything felt rushed, it could have used some extra chapters to explore some of the stuff presented here
 
i dont believe for one sec head teacher is alive.

ending is ok. overall this story is ok.
 
@Legend13 her destiny is ambiguous, but it seems she somehow survived. I could be wrong and that's a delusion of a character that did suffer a lot. It's an open ending, personally I don't like keeping it open, but for story purposes it works rather well. Like "you can't pretend to be normal and I'm going to be a ghost that reminds of that all of your life" kinda deal.
 
The trap and the blind girl survived...this remember of that series Dead summer,that the main girl was the villain and only the gay guy and the trans girl survived
 
There are still several unexplained things... But at least I'm glad Rinko and Shiiru survived. They were the best kids. Probably.
... I do wish we had more of the story. Among other things, about Mama. She seemed nice but also strangled Sakurako?
 
It was a good ride. Liked to see more and was pretty good for such a rushed ending.
 

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