Thanks, this translation's better and more readable than before.  And it's surprisingly similar too.  Only difference I noticed that much was Minoru's friend saying he's not into "flat chests / Tsundere" at the end.
No need to take these translations down.  While I like the other group's work, I'm not sure if they're that dedicated to finishing this series.  If it takes a "snipe" (not really, this series is SO behind) to get them started, they probably had no intention of continuing seriously anyhow.