Dawn the Teen Witch - Ch. 15 - The Library At Night

Thanks for the chapter!




One small thing... On the 1st panel of page 3, it would be better to say "When a large number of people are making the same mistake..." It's such a true statement, so that one small issue will draw a lot more attention than it would otherwise.
 
So to summarize the start of the chapter: Screw the victims, we gotta protect the bullies.
 

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