Destined Pair? I Disagree! - Ch. 0

[MangaDex]

 

[I_need_a_break]

It's promising? Really fast paced if this is indeed the first chapter, not the prologue, but it's fine for now I guess.

 

[Naka123]

sorry for the mistakes
- kingdom alice
-nobles and traders/peasants and slaves
-she was once the most loved soul by god
-is willing to give up all love from the god
sorry again for the disappointment, thank you for all your support
hope you like the series

 

[Dellena]

I really hpe she dosen't and up with the man who batrayed her

 

[Himecchi]

Well, that was very confusing, though I guess that's typical for chinese stories. This looked to be only a prologue so the next chapter will probably make more sense.

Oh yeah, it feels like the last bubble should've been "this time I won't regret anything" instead of "time I won't regret anything this."

Also, if you guys notice a typo or a mistake after releasing the chapter, you can sneakily replace the old version with the new and nobody will have to know :>

 

[Naka123]

@HIMECCHI YES MANY TYPOS SINCE WE DO NOT HAVE A QC, THX U

 

[maddery]

...that person is the ml isn't it? *sigh*

 

[SakuraShower]

I hate her name. I'm never going to be able to remember it.

 

[reallyreece]

the look he gave her when she said that leads me to believe there’s way more to it nonetheless this is interesting

 

[shiho]

Oh no! The guy who betrayed her is the male lead?

 

[Aran1]

a few other manga have put the prolog as chapter 1 recently but the ones ive seen have been better then the prologs that are actually spoiling the entire story.

 

[Kamelpov]

Well you can't set people free of god especially if you didn't ask the named god.(as royalty it's mostly bringing the clergy under control)

 

[hedgemoney]

Ugh, male leads in chinese shoujos are usually all the same. If its not an ore-sama dick head, its a Mr. Rich Iceberg. Come on, give a non-cliche character.