Disease - Ch. 16 - Ling Que

Thanks for the chapter.
Feedback: check when have/has is used.
I could be wrong though English isn't my first language.
 
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I don't want to be rude but in the 5th panel it should be "Those who live here either have a terminal illness or have lost hope in life".
Good job by the way I enjoyed reading this story.
 
Seems like a nice neighbourhood, except for the residents. But you can't have everything, right?
 

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