Page 11, I was confused there for a few seconds..... The Girl's hairstyle is too similar to the MC in close ups like that.....especially when side to side...... maybe she's a gender-swaped version of Zeo from a different timeline.
Honestly, that was pretty heartwarming. Redeeming folks is not an easy task and many would call it a waste of time. Still, it's not something that should be looked down upon.
But in all seriousness, I'm kind of sad the "battle" scenes aren't drawn well. I mean, I'm amused by the story but with the lack of proper drawing of battle scenes, it feels like it kind of holds it back from its potential or something.