Doreiku - GANG AGE -

it's very excited when i read chap 1, but what's next ? It's only a load of garbage reading the remain chapter which is stupid af
 
I've mentioned this in the comments of Ch.4 but this series, like the 'prequel', have the same chapter/content structure. The plot does not concentrate around an MC but around the SCM and every two chapters there is a new 'hero' in town..
 
Reading this made me lose brain cells, why? Because theres a weird ass time leap that happens then throws you straight into the thick of it. I wrote a story about a sentient pickle that makes more sense than this shit does
 

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