Dungeon ni Deai o Motomeru no wa Machigatte Iru Darou ka Gaiden - Sword Oratoria - Vol. 14 Ch. 56 - Judgement

Definitely a lot better than before. The font is more easy to look at and the translation feels a bit more cohesive. Good job
 
I think the being in robes and full face mask with claws is Chronos' second in command. At least I remember seeing him in the anime like that.
 
Oy
Your last page is not in correct order
Why the hell to be continued page is before the last page
 
It’s a lot better for sure and appreciate em coming again.
Also when does this take place before Apollo or during Apollo arc
 
Good work on this chapter!

I've always wondered how Freya can look so dignified despite of basically walking around half naked.
 
Something that you can try is finding a Spanish-English translator and had him using the light novels for reference while doing the translation

That’s what I did for the main series
 
@Rzgriz It's a double page spread, change your settings to display two pages....(I did update it though because the order was messed up, but the site I downloaded it from had it that way so I assumed it was normal.)
@MrMarty007 The Spanish translation looks like the person did the exact same thing that I did so there's not much point using them for reference, I might as well read the light novel.
 
@99usagi99 thanks for updating the first 11 pages with current font, +1 good job, appreciate it. Very nice please keep it up.
 
Some of loki's dialogue needs rewording, but it looks like a job for a real TL
 
This was a machine translation? Maybe it got fixed up a lot between release and now, but I only noticed one tiny problem (attacks instead of attack) on p33, otherwise it's miles better than I've seen from actual translators who don't speak English to a near flawless degree.
 

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