When you dismiss any criticism of translations with stuff like 'it's free so you don't get to complain' or 'why don't you just do it yourself if you don't like it' or 'we already have an incomprehensible version of this so go translate something else un-TL'd' that's how you end up with the literal fanfiction that was the other version of this chapter. Props to them for owning up to it and it ended up as a good demonstration of this even if it was stupid to release that chapter to begin with.