Gal Kazoku - Oneshot

give it serialization with intention to finish within 2-3 volumes and i think it'll be nice.

prolonged this kind of generic stories will only ended up with axed and rushed unsatisfying ending.
 
Everyone keeps calling this generic generic, but we all still happily read it and commented about it. Hence it was a good one that kept you reading till the end. 🤩
 
Why did he have to hit the old man? I know he’s a perv trying to pick up highschool schools in the middle of the afternoon, but it’s not like he made any attempt to touch/hurt Mitsuki, he could have been talked down... I know it may seem like a weird comment, but I find it kind of shocking how violence against ‘bad’ people can be normalized so much that stuff like this can pass under people’s radar. MC probably didn’t even hear any of the conversation either, just sees some sweaty old guy and feels the need to hit him.
 
Hitting all the generic tropes in a shot. Yeah no. Really now? Parents going hotspring right away? This is just like hentai manga plot without the hentai, in short : trash
 
@MasterPannya

 
Is it me or everyone's trying to copy Domestic Kanojo?

LOL.
You know this type of story exist since a long time, right ? Even way before the author of Dnk started writing her first chapter ever ?
A good exemple of a very similar story would be Parallel, who started in 2001.
 
No wtf
Be together
As long as youre not blood related, its fine
Wtf
No negative effects.
No inbred
 
Oh it's date tsunehiro. No wonder the art feels so familiar. On other note : go for it you lil' sh*t it's legal !!!
 
So he saw her sleeping on the couch 1 month before he met her?
That don't seem right.
 
Everyone here talking bout incest and inbreeds but no one is appreciating the bros self control. Mad respect for him. Also finally found a chapter with a good art. Imo just give this 12 chapters when serialized but its fine if it isnt serialized.
 
I swear I've read porn with this exact premise with the parents finding out about their relationship and approving it at the end and I couldn't remember the name. Please continue my research fellow men of culture!

At this point I'm just curious now.
 
Another fine addition to my "why the fuck is this a oneshot instead of being serialized?" collection.
 

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