Gemini - Ch. 1

Artwork and story had potential, but the setup feels so hackneyed. This is likely more of a commentary on myself, though, as opposed to the younger audience this is targeted towards.
 
reminds me of the girl?/cyborg? with a worldbreaker arm in a more futuristic setting. cant remember the name of that manga
 
You finally figured that out at the end of the chapter, kid? Someone's not the brightest.
 
Hm, maybe humans were infected by parasites which urge the user to consume and combine, but she rejected those urges? and there are probably more like her? So there's a chance that they are dealing with aliens.
 
I thought the art looked familiar, it's the same artist who did Mieruko-chan. Same nightmare fuel monster design. Looks a little interesting but the first chapter is quite generic so far.
 
@Yurisivel He sure has a knack for drawing horrific abominations, but at least this girl can actually effectively fight back against them this time around. You're right that it seems pretty generic so far. Honestly, there isn't much else that's interesting beyond the art.

Also, why in the world are those things even called hyenas of all things? Considering that other monster was named a "zealot", a religion-based named probably would've been more appropriate.
 

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