General, Please Stay - Ch. 1 - Seeking Brother

background info: while i was mid-way through TLing this the comic was updated with all new dialogue and i had to retranslate almost everything i did. however some things i felt worked better in the original version so what you see here is a conglomerate of both the original and revamped versions
 
The MC is such a cool person. I would've loved her even if she was a man
The ML, though, leaves much to be desired.
 
I like this story so far. Anyway the female lead is too handsome, it's hard for me to think of her as a woman.
 

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