Girls und Panzer - Chi-HaTan Academy Aggressive (Doujinshi) - Vol. 1 Ch. 146

[MangaDex]

 

[JohnHammond]

If someone looked at the originals and noticed some of my translations are wrong, please let me know and I'll fix it

 

[MavB_Ver]

@JohnHammond

I think Klara's dialogue should have been "take care" instead, consider how worried she looked in the panel. But that's fine too I guess.

And when Katyusha shouted, I think that Nonna jumped out because she was worried a real bear had actually appeared. Hence that bubble should have been: "Bear!? Where is it!? Run quickly Katyusha!!" Would make more sense because if she wanted to scare Katyusha off, she should not have talked.

 

[JohnHammond]

@MavB_Ver the one from Nonna is fine, that's what the text translates too. I'll have my actual translator look at the one of Klara though.

 

[MavB_Ver]

@JohnHammond
Actually, the Nonna's one is really out of place. Say, if her aim was to scare Katyusha then the moment it was achieved, she didn't have to go back into hiding anymore. That means she jumping out was not of her original intention.

And you say that the text tranlates that way, but the subject was omitted in the first sentence, and the second sentence is an imperative one, not question...

 

[JohnHammond]

@MavB_Ver Alright, so I let someone take a look at it who knows japanese better then I do and he said that I got a kanji mixed up with another. Anyways, I fixed it now.

 

[MavB_Ver]

@JohnHammond
Thank you for your service.