Gourmet Gaming - Vol. 1 Ch. 21 - Potatoes

[MangaDex]

 

[ksen]

This light hearted way of treating comments is the best, just saying.

 

[Fari]

He wanted that seed, wink wink

 

[Heero101086]

You guys do you. You're doing a great job. Anyone who complains can f right off. Are they paying for something? No! So, beggars cannot be choosers.

 

[Zathz]

thanks for the update @Moonl1ght

 

[SnowyAkera]

I must say, the quality of your translation has improved greatly over the last couple of chapters, keep up the good work!

 

[blablablah]

That is one fabulous farmer

 

[pond]

MOREEE

 

[gingermackay]

Such a jelly bean.thank you so much for the translation

 

[Fran1212]

He is so sweet and wholesome..I honestly will give him everything too

 

[GoodbyeMangaRock]

Thank you for the translation

 

[Riger]

Isn't that ring a little op, depending on what skill you absorb? Especially if you absorb a skill with a cd longer than 10 minutes, lol.

 

[Mewth]

The 'cheat' he got escalated quickly so did the scanlation.

 

[kasume224]

You're doing great scanlators. Thank you.

 

[Azpark]

Hmm, great design for game though, where npcs are either ai, or very good at reacting to prompts based off of lore.

 

[Deathmaze]

Just.... Wow really... This chapter update is worth it! Thank u for this

 

[Mizuhashi]

Thank you for your hardwork ^^

 

[Hadski]

Repair your other chapters those are still awful

 

[Ciel]

I appreciate you listening to your readers' feedback. I would like to take this time to tell you a few ways to further refine your translation.

There's random missing periods. They may not be there in the raws, but it's up to the translator to make the story approachable in English--including them is the better choice.

Also, the constant "huwaw"s are a bit annoying. Could you translate it into something that's English? Like, "wow" maybe?

"so much sweet potatoes" -- sweet potatoes is countable, so it should be "so many sweet potatoes" if you're going to make it plural. Otherwise, you could write "so much sweet potato!" or even "this is a lot of sweet potatoes!"

"When did the reporters, knew about this?" is ungrammatical. "When did the reporters learn about this?" or "Since when did the reporters know about this?" are grammatical alternatives.

"Did you told them ahead of time?" is also ungrammatical. "Did you tell them ahead of time?" would be a grammatical alternative.

There are numerous mistakes along the same vein that I don't have time to list them out, but I do think it would be good for you to quality check your translations more.

 

[Kun100]

Well, "delicious" is the keyword lol
He'll get it with any cost