Hana to Eru - Oneshot

[MangaDex]

 

[Rathendar]

This was cute, Ty.

 

[Ranzo]

The hell is with this story? With so many weird twists and turns it just seemed to become more and more absurd

Like a carnival ride

 

[Stadenwick]

So it's still incest?

 

[Oeconomist]

No incest; just mistaken tagging.

 

[NamelessGent]

Man, this story definitely went places.

 

[dokidoki]

this story was a GREAT IDEA poor execution OTL, would love if they worked on this more and had more chapters, really liked the idea

 

[Bibbedibob]

This was all over the place

 

[FiddlePop]

In all honesty the MC being the illegitimate daughter and still being the master of the maid was something new

 

[ma_ko]

Neat, ty for translating this

 

[Kevadu]

That was...an awful lot for a oneshot. If it had a few more chapters to flesh things out it would have been fine...

 

[CyanHide]

Felt rushed, someone could steal and refine this later

 

[SpacePriest]

This gave me a sort of "tripped and stumbled all over the place and fell down the stairs but somehow landed OK" kind of feeling. Like in a fever dream, where you run downhill too fast and get scared and feel like you should lose your balance, but you just keep going.

Needs to be extended to at least a whole volume, really.