Heaven's Souls - Ch. 1

Cant find my self liking it to be honest. MC looks like a dickhead whos alraedy enraptured by the "heroines". While that kinda normal for a guy going purity, it just doesnt make the story interesting at all. If thats the case, then pick a number and get in line like the other million guys like him.

But only first chapter, but its first impression isnt that great.
 
Hmm, I was hopeful until the MC was introduced, I was hoping there'd be a female MC
 

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