Henai

ok listen here y the fuck do one shots exist it feels every time like the first chapter of a manga and u feel like now the story starts but no it just ends
 
ooh..i already read this in facebook months ago..and yep,nice concept here..kinda creepy but uhh-cute..well,its cute when youre into each other so yep..
 
Having read quite a few of these, the stories are incredibly predictable almost all have the same twists i.e yandere, stalker, etc... Not saying they're not good but it would be nice to have some variety
 
This could be really good if it was not a one shot. Hope this gets picked up and serialized
 

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