Her Majesty's Swarm - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - The First Time into the Outside World

I hate how these main characters dont even try to be mysterious even a little as their first impression. The manga artist's storytelling is too bland.
 
One thing that bothered me this entire time is the elf that was sitting down while her friend was buying time. The entire time I was like "GET UP AND RUN" but of course this will never happen because its manga and you never question logic.
 
@Scruby_Lue

The problem is most people don’t really know what it’s like to be paralyzed by fear. I’ve had a few patients tell me what it’s like and most of the time they describe it as if they get tunnel vision and their limbs simply refuse to move.

That’s why I find it sad that most people think it’s people being stupid even though it’s normal.
 
This is way too cheesy. I'm not even lactose intolerant, but I can't read this from all the cheesiness!

MC saved pretty elf boy and girl from slave traders, hurray! *clap clap clap* It was cool the first 27 times I've seen it happen.

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@Serapheid Yeah, I had forgotten that this could actually happen to people. It was pretty dumb of me to say but I was really annoyed with how many times I had seen the same old 'Saving the girl from bandits' trope. Thank you for clearing my mind on this kind of thing!
 
Oh- she's beautiful
After 3 chapters it really does feels like overlord. Of course, there's differences. Actually I have been waiting for a queen isekai with monster and strategy like overlord so this is a delight !
 
manga is moving through the plot at lightning speed... skipped all the initial setup
 
It is moving veryy fasr. Like I don't she would be able to adjust so quickly and be able to use so many powers.
 
Guys, you do know how common it is for the MC in manga to go save the day in this type of situation despite being cliche, although I do believe the author should have created a setup/foreshadowing first before going to this event.
 
The artist is really overdoing it with the filter on some panels, blurs details that have no right to be such a mess.
But then some panels look great.

Page 9, first 2 panels are good but the rest are messy
Page 12 is just blurry all around.
Page 18 ruins her face/eyes and muddles her top
Page 19, second panel, once again makes a mess out of her face.
 

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