Herbalist

[MangaDex]

 

[leechXlurk]

Seems interesting! Awaiting more chs.

F**k! It's

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tragedy!

 

[Mikaa]

Heh, pierwsze polskie cuś na tej stronce na jakie natrafiłam

 

[monstergelo]

Too lewd for me

 

[anikaniko]

Fudge. I regret reading it.

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what a tragedy

 

[KirieSempai]

why?

 

[Soren59]

@anikaniko

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What tragedy? I couldn't see any up to chapter 4 (aside from that lord guy possibly doing something in later chapters)

 

[kryokori]

@KirieSempai that 'too lewd' might be probably due to realism of the style, since lot of the act was not really shown if you compare it with other smut series The 'tragedy', 'fudge' and 'regrets' might be probably due to specific audience who comes for 'manga/manhua' etc. and not 'comics'. Too bad none of commentators actually shared any constructive criticism and just summed it in one word for you.

Personaly, I thought it would be worse and was positively surprised. But I'd put it into 'comics' not 'manga' readers. The font in dialog bubbles irks me a bit. Using comic sans or something than this technical one could be better - giving less artifical effect. Adding translation notes at the end of chapter might be a nice bonus, since usually it takes a slav to get some references right (like rusałka).

 

[anikaniko]

@kryokori oh sorry about that. My comment was not really directed to how the author wrote the story but how I felt after reading the last chapter.

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I was just surprised, it was a sad ending so I didn't really expect for that to happen. And the reveal too.

I am also a comic reader and I appreciate the artwork.

@Soren59 I read it in webtoon, it's completed there. I looked for it on the internet since I got interested.

 

[kryokori]

@anikaniko if the reader skim on words and make the author misunderstand, the poor thing might end up crying in some dark corner sulking for no reason we must never save in word count for those creatures, since they recharge their working energy and spirit from the long and wordy praises

 

[ZombiesAreNotOkay]

Wow this actually pretty solid.

 

[KirieSempai]

@anikaniko this story was made up for webtoons' short story contest, so that's why the ending is like this but I'm working now a new webcomic which will contain this story but changed, so cheer up

 

[KirieSempai]

thank you all for good words

 

[anikaniko]

@KirieSempai Ohh that's nice. Looking forward. Good work! :)

 

[JeDePi]

@KirieSempai Please add a tragedy tag. Can't wait for the better ending.

 

[kasajizo]

Even Escanor cries!

 

[Itsasumabitch]

Bullshitttttt I mean cmon

 

[KirieSempai]

Hi guys! As I promised I've created a new series you can read it here https://mangadex.org/title/55670/the-hawk-s-song
The only one thing that connects those 2 titles is romance between Tolisława and Lech, so it's totally new story I hope you'll like it :)