Houkago no Goumon Shoujo - Vol. 1 Ch. 9 - Shortening Distance!?

Seems a bit contrived to be honest. Like there just so happened to be a pervert there and he just so happened to come back in time...


Should have had some foreshadowing in my opinion. Like we see she has a creepy stalker which is why she's so paranoid about him, but when he confronts the guy, after some build up, she begins to like him a little bit more.
 
@Tamerlane I mean, that could make the mistake of being stellar writing, which doesn't belong in manga (Sue me. A manga with actually good writing is rare enough to be a unicorn). Especially not one of this genre.
 
My prediction wasn't exactly right, but at least half of it was.
In a manner of speaking he did rescue her, she DID hit him and she did start falling for him.
 

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