I Belong to House Castiello - Ch. 74

@Disguised22 I agree. I feel really strange to see her taller and in her fancy dress but still act like a kid.

@Mira995 IKR? I thought it was just me, isn't it weird that her intelligence seems to fluctuate here and there? I rather she is consistently dumb then šŸ™„Why the heck does she still want to go to the estate when it's clearly a trap and who cares about whatever gift it is?
 
Why is everyone hiding things from her? She’s the lady of the house so a servant should be obligated to tell her unless the master of the house orders them not to.
 
Estelle: ā€œI might not be fully grown but my mind is matureā€ tf it is notšŸ˜‚
like honestly no wonder literally every character she’s interacted with except mister butler keep things from her and doesn’t answer her questions honestly. Thank you for the chapter tho!
 
I'm disliking Emil more and more with every appearance. Is your job to keep her safe from physical harm, or keep her safe from the dangers of having to think for herself and be a person with agency?
 
same u dont like emil since they revealed his true personality, its like they went: well know that shes 16 we cant have the ML be fluffy now he must be handsome but with a bit of darkness! also make him more possesive!, and secretive!
 
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idk, this is kind of disappointing... after the time skip, this story's gotten somewhat... dull, i guess? i'm losing interest šŸ˜”
 
If you think that all the character's dumb then it's obviously the author's fault to a degree alright
 
They could just go busting down the Marquis door and basically swat them all with their powers combined to check what's going on
 
Are there a bunch of missing parts of the page? The word bubbles keep getting cut off and the dialog seems disjointed.
 
As much as I like to see the progress of this story, it’s making me hard to. I can’t really pinpoint a specific trait but I’m starting to get annoyed with Estelle in each chapter. Guess I’m putting it on hold for now.
 
Holy shit, the child talked to her parent about her plot driven troubles. Is this still a comic?
 
It's quite an annoying arc indeed with nothing happening and whatever is happening being hidden. Emiel really feels super off. "I don't want to tell you why every single person tells you i suck but trust me". I mean sure i do believe he is on her side in the story but i see no reason to hide it and I am sure i will be dissapointed when we find out. And for that reason MC glossing over it is kinda triggering. Honestly kind of understandable though, seing as apparently everyone just keeps secrets from her in a strange attempt to protect her i guess? Because lack of knowledge is her best asset right now. To top that off we have sudden spirit superpower which feel like they could fix whatever and the risk is kind of low honestly. If she overuses it she has to spend eternity with elf guy, who seemed like a decent person, and some spirits.
 
this chapter has some serious mistakes. have you been rushing? we always appreciate your work but please dont feel the need to pump it out if youre not ready to! take the time you need! stay hydrated dont burn yrselves out.

lov u
 
After the mage tower plot, this story has been a mess. Coming back to it after putting it on hold and it's still a mess. It's not fluffy enough for slice of life, not enough betrayal for drama and not enough plot progress for action/mystery. This just feela like the lackluster parts of all 3 of these things. Everytime I think we're going towards one of these and get some flow going, it get's cut off.

I'm putting it on hold one more time, if it's still a mess after that I'm dropping this.
 

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