I Bid You Adieu - Ch. 4

The art is nice but the writing feels a bit hammy. "Accidentally " talk infront of "sleeping" person. Breaking off with the fiancee while internal monologue is all about how her panties are frothing to the seams. It's so hammy I am laughing half the time I am reading.
 
Ah yeah, its still early enough to place bets!
Boy would it be unique and different if her engagment stayed broken and he didn't suddenly find her "interdastin" cuz she's acting different.
 
wait... so she showed up without the debt bill in hand?
how the F is he supposed to believe her words then?
She just showed up without a plan at all?
 
Why didn't she bring the contract? She was imagining it being torn probably vshould have did that in front of him. Unless her father has it but why? I though it was her scheme
Thanks for the update
 
The villain looks quite pretty with all the expressions she shows. Good art. Tho the ML looks kinda dull. And his scars kinda appear and disappear.
 
I wonder if he actually does love her. And he was happy being one of her conquests. And now he doesn't want to be tossed away. Interesting.

Thanks for the upload!
 
@twilightspirits

I know?!? That what I was thinking? If that's all she had to said I would have just written a letter. "Hey, i'm breaking up with you, i'll be at your house tomorrow w/ contract."
 
its quite lacking, both the writing and the art
sticking around to see if it gets any better
thank you for the update
 

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