I Came to Another World as a Jack of All Trades and a Master of None to Journey While Relying on Quickness - Vol. 1 Ch. 2.2

[ShionSinX]

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shoftly

The type setter could split the text between the balloons when theres more than one, and put the text always in the middle of them.

 

[Phelix]

Well. That was dumb. Why not let her beat the guys, we know they aren't competent and that she is. The world needs less captain save a hoes.

 

[Straforel]

Kuro no Usagi, is a bad nick name?

Well, my female friend use this name for his female MC , maybe that's why it's embarassing.

 

[monkey123]

This plot... is really... strange.

@Aichan
Are you ok? Because you speak in 3rd persona.

 

[Aichan]

@monkey123

Ai-chan is okay, thanks for asking. In Ai-chan's culture, using the name as first person pronoun is normal. In Ai-chan's culture, the name can be first person, second person and third person pronoun. Most English speakers do not understand this because in English, the name is a third person pronoun only.

 

[S0ulReaper]

Being a Jack of all trades isn't really bad, It's the Opposite...You are good at everything which means you are super useful and OP, Yeah sure you are not a master but it does not meant that you are bad at that particular thing, If you think of it...Jack of all trades is really an awesome one to get rather than being a master of magic or swordmanship since all your good points goes to a certain skill unlike Jack of all trades where it is Balance and you are good at both magic and swordsmanship.

 

[Nenphy]

3 chapters, one after another lacking pages, are you even trying?? dropped
raws here to check the pages missing: https://mangant.com/manga/isekai-ni-kita-boku-wa-kiyoubinbode-subaya-sa-tayorina-tabi-o-suru-manga-raw/chapter-2.2/620040

 

[PineyCreek]

I can't tell if the translation is bad or if the plot is badly put together or both.

 

[IShallReadTheHeavens]

Nice sand attack.

 

[Winchan]

@PineyCreek

I think the plot is ok, the translation is at the least understandable, but the way it is drawn and narrated... feel like a storyboard sketch, looks unrefined and hastily made.

mix up the mediocre elements, (the plot is forgivable, it's a slice of life) feels like it'll definitely produce a better result with more investment to detail and time and the minor issues in narration.

I see myself doing something similar a few years back if I had the ambition to draw a manga... When comparing this manga to the other of the artist's works (which looks much better), it definitely feels like a novice work.