I Log in Alone - Ch. 2

There's some stuff to fix on both these chapters, like name consistency.
I'll fix these later today, it's really not worth pointing it out if you're intending to.
 
wait, the castles appeared 10 years ago, but this guy is in his 20s and was hulk power from birth. how does that work?

and kind of disappointed that he was special from the start instead of having an origin event. and he seems oblivious about how different he is, even though he says he's special.
 
Thanks for the chapter!
Anyone have any idea by what the system (unless someone has a better idea on what to call the thing making the announcement,) meant when it said White Wing Cemetery cleared? They fell through the ground, didn't look like killed anything, and ended up in the Ant Cave Dungeon. So where is White Wing Cemetery coming from? Also, if ordinary people can become Low Tier Players and be reborn as Supporters after training and meeting certain conditions, why is she, a Full Player, being reborn as a Supporter? Isn't that a demotion or something? Also, seems system was only talking about Ah-Rin and nothing about MC. Considering all the eyes looking at them seems this is one of those exceptions on dungeon rules should take with a grain of salt.
Or is it because rest of team were killed, was severely injured and still recovering, and weakened she was demoted from Player to Supporter, while MC went from civilian to Low Tier Player due to saving a Player, surviving a fall that would even kill Players, and entering+completing a dungeon?
 
Could have used an establishing shot of where the MC was before he jumped into a void to catch the girl.
 
ok everyone, the lesson from this chapter is that if you want to catch a wifu, you have to knock her out with a bottle by kicking it very hard and high into the sky. At least that's what I think the author is trying to say.
edit: oh I misunderstood. It seems the bottle had nothing to do with why the girl was failing from the sky.
 
Its clear hes not the player.. Shes the low tier player..... Hes been strong since being born before these systems started. Hes an anomaly outside. Is how it should be. IT seems to me he doesnt even need to be a player, He could just bash his way in.
 
I wish that whatever clothes ppl wear in these existed in real life. No tears, shape forming, stay precisely on, no rolling down, shaped perfectly.. Cry
 
Man the writing/dialogue really took a nose dive in this chapter, and it's only two chapters in...
 

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