I Love My Yandere Neko Girlfriend (New)

Well I gave it a try, but...no offense, but this is really not good.

The art is one problem, but the writing is an even bigger one. It feels like the person who wrote it has absolutely no experience in writing a story. I'm not sure if you're trying to use the site to gain some traction for your series, but it seems like you need more practice first. I don't know what the site rules for original works are, but this feels really out of place here.
 
@PythiaTheLiar i went to dig around, and this doesnt even seem to have any korean, chinese, japanese, hell even taiwanese authors, theyre literally some DA kids.
 
This is on sonichu levels. I underestimate how low humanity can fall.
 
@mug3n oh it gets worse, its being published at webtoon, so they are getting income from it, and its got a fanbase to boot!
 
DIscover doesn't get income, only the ones the the main page at webtoons. Or is this being released in another place like Tapas or Lezhin?
 

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