I Stole the Male Lead's First Night - Vol. 1 Ch. 30

I kinda wished for a cliche dramatic chase where she runs away when they’re about to kiss and he’s all like “oH fuck I might have taken this too far” and runs after her

But at the same time the story needed something like this to show MC fighting for ML (or at least her actively perusing him), as for most of the story (and basically the whole plot) ML has been the one chasing the MC
 
Good Action Ripley. If the duke continued the kiss I woulda punch him for going too far
 
omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg u may now kiss the bride 👰👄💋👄🤵 *👏*
 
KKKYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yes! Yes! Yes yes yes yaaaaassssssssss!!!! 😍😍😍😄💞💞💞😄💞👏👏👏💞👏😁😁😁 what a way to handle that situation as well!! 😉😘
 
I absolutely loved the chapter! Though I just happened to notice a slight spelling error? 'Dose' instead of 'does' on page 35 I believe. It's nothing major, just thought I'd say something. Great job though!
 

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