I Was Wrong - Oneshot

I know everyone say mc's an idiot but isn't it inevitable? He's going to die at some point being haunted by his girlfriend - stress, depression, whatsoever... We already know his mental health is not that good at the moment.
 
This oneshot was fun to read but sadly the ending was pretty obvious, he started thinking she was just a normal girl near the end even though in the beginning we got to know about the wiretapping, gps tracking and knife-wielding, so it was clear that there was something wrong

It'd be funny if now that he realized he wasn't the bad guy he'd just peacefully pass on instead of lingering in the world, that'd make for a great ending gag
 
Wait was the bzz bzz bzz noise on the final page suppose to show that he was dreaming this whole time?
 
@Awsim
LOL yeah, would love it if the revelation made him realized he did the right thing after all, and the relief made him pass on, leaving the psycho girlfriend screaming behind
 

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