Many Japanese grammar and spelling errors, author has never bothered to go back and do corrections unlike others (a sign author doesn't take their writing seriously)
Rambling, longwinded writing with too much perspective rehashing; slow plodding pacing. Add with the short individual chapters, and they found it tiring to read overall.
Author has some good plot ideas in some parts, but is too much of a writing/pacing amateur to make it work properly.
Lucie's plot to run away in the future felt illogical to reader, could there have been better options?