Much good, very English.
I feel like you might not understand if I only make jokes. Please learn English before translating. And find a proofreader This is completely unreadable.
It looks like you may have translated this from another language. In which case they mau be having trouble with the translation as well, as it speaks in the usual indirect Japanese way. Machine translations look similar to what's present. Someone either fluent or familiar enough with Japanese would be able to throw the missing nouns in there that either you or the source material omitted.