I'll Become the Tyrant's Tutor - Ch. 1

Look girl, you said that you need a girl with black hair and red eyes because they are the colors needed for ML. But you have red hair and black eyes. Since you only need those two colors red and black, It still works!!
 
To critique her novel, she had a very interesting premise between the father, the curse, and the son's colorblindness. If she hadn't tried to insert a love interest and have some nonsense about love curing him it could have been a pretty decent story. A son born from a curse laid on a father, who grows up to kill his father has some nice classical Greek vibes.
 
Someone need to give this kid that Bob Ross monochromatic painting lesson. Art can be beautiful too, even if it’s only in black and white.
 
Wait, why can't she just give up being his art teacher here and not involve with him anymore? Why need to find the FL?
Btw, she really expected a novel about a murderer who massacred his family getting lovey dovey with a woman would become popular? It's disgusting.
 
Ughh, the original story is shit. Why do authors think Mcs need a partner to get over their coldhearted actions. Romance had no place being in that book. It would've been better if over the years he started to see colour again and he sees the portrait of his mom and stopped being coldhearted. Anything would've been better than romance.
 
Lmao the original story is so cliche. It's literally the colorblind soulmate AU rehashed.
 
lol no his name is not Taeyang. Koreans usually use the word sun of the empire for a king and I think his name is actually Vierno cus hangul don't have 'v' in their alphabet and replace it with 'b'. so maybe it's " The sun of the empire Vierno"
 
The promo made this a lot more interesting 😴. I still kinda like the premise but as what the others have said, it's incredibly dumb to suddenly insert a love interest and she could have just ran away.
 

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