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@ParagonNight Feels realistic. I have been in her position before where I like being friends with a guy and I know he likes me but I'm just trying to keep reminding him that I'm not interested. Yes it's stupid but it's the truth. Girls just tend to be like that sometimes. I like these interactions in this chapter. I realise that Maise trusts him too much and we as readers realise that this guy clearly has a more sinister ulterior motive. I may be reading too much into this but I think Maise knows but she likes their friendship too much to ruin it. Yes dumb but alas, girls.
Anyways, I think this is top tier story-telling right here.
Anyways, I think this is top tier story-telling right here.
because I needed more, then I got depressed that I didn't understand all the words and couldn't let the dialogue sink in like I normally do, then stuff happened in that chapter that made me think, "Yes. I need to read this in it's English entirety. I'm not that good at Spanish." Then blah blah blah and blah blah blah and
sometimes she makes remarks as if she’s the one who is trapping him, not the other way around xD and sometimes she acts so dense that I get a teeny tiny bit annoyed xD
