I didn't feel that translation or editing was rough or noticeably different than usual, but the chapter felt like from a different manga.
She was suddenly yearning for her fated person? Where did that come from? Yes, she always wanted to meet always-under-tree-dream-guy, but I didn't get any 'fated person'-shoujo manga vibes from any other chapter so far, so why the rush now?
How about we get greedy with this? Let her come and go regularly. If he has that much power, then I don't see why he can't resummon her after sending her back.