People complaining about sentence flow when everything was easily understandable and made sense, sure there were words missing here and there but anyone used to reading translations should be used to auto correcting that in their head already. At least someone is finally translating this, he could get an editor or a proof reader but it's not necessary at the moment, all those commenters bitching about syntax errors should be offering to be the proof reader if it bothers them that much.
Thanks for the chapter, I was hoping someone would give this another chance.