Isekai de Item Collector - Ch. 1

i like how we start with actual magical blackmail, but u guys can bet that in 2 chapters they will have a great relationship
 
Frankly, I couldn't pay attention to the plot at all after I realized that the MC spends 75% or more of his scenes in the chapter with his mouth wide open. The female lead is not much better. The whole thing feels awkward and weird.
 
What kind of suicidal dumbass decides to deep-fry in a small boat that's sitting on rocking waves, and he's using an open flame propane burner?
 
Whoops. I was just too thirsty and accidently drank your dads soul. Sorry, not sorry
 
"Kouma you swallowed my father's soul!!"
??WTF????????????

Tbh this feel like a story you would find from a new writer on fanfiction.net
 
See that's why you don't just leave the souls of your family members sitting around on a shelf in an unlocked room.
 

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