Isekai de Slow Life wo (Ganbou) - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - Learning Alchemy

[MangaDex]

 

[GodGinrai]

"A steal?" should be "A theft?".

 

[Ixiaz]

ow. that was some good old 90's google translate grammar.

 

[Druidacious]

There’s a lot of places I’m thinking the TL cut text out. Even with the grammar I doubt a manga would have so little dialogue.

 

[starburst98]

Get someone to check your work, this was just horrid, bad grammar and hard to understand sentences.

 

[yokeisnojoke]

"Sorry for grammar, im from another world" i lul'd

 

[Raifurain]

@GodGinrai could even be a thief

 

[AnonymousWeeaboo]

This is English?

 

[Engylizium]

I didn't cut out any text, this is most close translation with some additions from novel. When i was reading chapter almost every page looked abrupt and not connected for me too. Anyway, i do what i can

P.s.: Changed "a steal?" to "a theft?"
p.p.s: to RimuruH: That's obvious

 

[RimuruH]

@op
Look if a character says “the weather is sun”
Don’t write that. Write: “It sure is sunny!”

As an example

 

[Tamerlane]

Broke: Isekai protagonist buying a slave
Woke: Isekai protagonist stealing a slave
Bespoke: Isekai protagonist illegally feeding a slave

 

[cullinaire]

This artist has some skill.

 

[feha]

when did he have trouble with aristocracy? I am confused. What flower?

Also, lol. "I see some highlights in you" is such a mangaka thing to say. Breaking fourth wall?

 

[xyzzy]

I need money, so I guess I need to get a job selling potions!

Gosh, MC-kun, that’s some pickle! You know what would help you? Maybe some sort of skill that gives you money every day. That would clearly solve that problem, wouldn’t it?

Oh, wait. You have that skill. You explicitly stated that you chose it because you didn’t want to work and instead want to live a slow life. And yet you decide that you want to start a business anyway.

YOU LITERALLY GOT RID OF THE SINGLE INTERESTING TWIST IN YOUR ISEKAI STORY IN THE SECOND FUCKING CHAPTER

 

[lenovoaxioo]

I really can't find any logic behind this clothes (tell me if there's one). I think just a simple rag or normal shirt is enough.

 

[Syanalassa]

@xyzzy he stated that it would give more money as he leveled the money skill up so it probably doesnt give enough to live on at the moment but was a detail that was skipped in the manga or something

 

[Hoezell]

mAd EnGrIsH sKiLlZ

 

[xyzzy]

@Syanalassa

They had enough time to show the MC feeding a slave girl but not enough time to show more of his primary motivation?

 

[mrmm]

@lenovoaxioo I always turn off my brain when reading isekais (not all of them)

 

[Fadamor]

Well there certainly are grammatical errors.