Isekai Nonbiri Nouka

"It's that dangerous thing you see in detective dramas"

My first thought was nightshade, or some similar poison. My second thought was weed. Please let it be the latter.
 
Hmmm, I kinda get bored reading it right now. It feels like reading a Log rather than an actual story, everything felt bland. I guess because the story have no basic story structure like intro, progress, rising action/tension, conflict, climax, aftermath, falling action, and denouement. It's completely flat, everything went into mc favour.
 
This is obviously a series where the author is just self-inserting. I have thing for terrible series; it's interesting enough.
 
this becomes more boring by the chapter, it became like a sitcom with daily happenings taking over the majority of panels.
 
This manga is being super barebones. They are passing by all the story moments and there isn't even filler. We don't even get to know the characters anymore. A bio and it's off to dialogue on a trade deal or village management.

There has been a baby and a pregnant angel and I don't think either had more than a panel.
 
1. We do this.
2. I got this.
3. This happened.
4. The result is this.

This is just a picture diary, or a report, or a list of event. Because there's actually no story telling at all.
 
So glad they needed a separate chapter for those extra 4 pages, I don't know If I could have handled them all at once.
 
Feels like a journal, or perhaps a production/transaction log.
____May 5th_____
Produced: 500 grapes, 10 gallons of wine, 30 puppies, 500 spiders, 1 angel, and 10 acres of farm land.
Attempting production of 2 vampires, 30 elfs, 10 beastmen, 4 angels, and one oni.
Sold: 10 gallons of wine.
Purchased: 100 Elfs, 17 beastwomen, 5 lolis of a new, unheard of race.
____May 6th____
Same as yesterday times 1.15
____May 7th____
Same as yesterday times 1.15
____May 8th____
Same as yesterday, but I really hurt my thing, God I wish I wasn't running a harem factory with thousands of beautiful girls and women but no other males in sight. How unlucky am I?!
 
He wasted the whole segment on conjecture about the hierarchy of power in the family
 

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