Jahy-sama wa Kujikenai! - Vol. 4 Ch. 32 - Jahy-sama and the Landlady Who Ran from Home

Good to see you back !
In all honesty, not being mean ; but Temporary's TL quality was a step above, the way they picked some sentences (over yours) made either more sense/had better form.
I'm not saying this in a bad, there's always room to improve, I hope to be able to see more of it :) Welcome back on this series !
 
There are a couple of lines I think I liked better with Temp's, but there's no denying how much cleaner and better edited Orchesc/a/ns is, like the falling letters on page 4. Considering that they're both on /a/, maybe the best timeline is one where they cam team up?
 
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Please don't put punctuation on a newline by itself
.

I mean
...
It was especially bad in this chapter
,
but it's never good
.

Please
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Just
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Don't
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Temp scans seem more understandable and better overall, but thanks for working hard on this version anyway.
 
Maou-Chan's anatomy is uncanny. Like she's supposed to be sitting down but her ass is floating in the air and it looks like she's balancing her entire body on the toes of one foot.
 

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