Dude. Do you proofread these AT ALL? I get it if you're an ESL, and if's that's the case get someone to help. The quality of the last few chapters has been pretty awful.
[ol][/ol] Page 1: "I'll use this chance and enjoy to the fullest!"
When it should be "I'll use this chance and enjoy it to the fullest!" or "I'll use this chance and enjoy my time here to the fullest!"
[ol][/ol] Page 4: "Earlier, Yun said I was bad right. I'm still shock from that." "Are you really a technician?"
I don't even know how to fix this as I have no idea what the hell you're trying to say. For the middle section, (if that translation is even accurate) it should be "I'm still in shock from that."
[ol][/ol] Page 4: "That's right Ako. Let me proof it to you."
It should be "Let me prove it to you."
[ol][/ol] Page 5: "Can you face in front?"
Should be "Can you face the front?"
[ol][/ol] Page 6: When she's rubbing Yun: "Hore Hore"
WTF is hore hore??