...can you make actual fucking sense. The hell are you babbling about with all that talking. Just say if we're fighting or not.
Too much time wasted on having a full essay of dialogue.
Too much effort wasted into trying to check off a list of emotions the protagonist is going to rush through instead of thoroughly digest.
Too much nakama wasted. Oh look how he's relying on everyone, it's like they're a real tight team that trust and rely on each other. Team work guys-uggh.
The story doesn't even care. Doesn't even care about the bastardized ideologies it's trying to shove down our throats in the span of minutes. It just wants the Technicality Rights under its belt. "Our protagonist had an emotion, he really cares about the people he works with, he fights together with them as a team, he's really brave despite being normal, we make good story". Argh!