Jui-san no Oshigoto in Isekai - Vol. 2 Ch. 15

Really like this series, but the power's name is just getting worse. Having English mixed with Portuguese, and the author didn't even write correctly, as usual
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Wow, an unexpectedly intense couple of chapters. Good to see the main stepping up though it cost a bunny to make him do it. :/
 
Nora is dead :'(
Welp, it does give some credibility in the harshness of this world but come on...
 
Anyone who thinks her death had no meaning or was bad writing / pointless confuses me. She died defending someone who she personally admired and values more than herself due to his knowledge / otherworlder status and because he treated he as a human equal. He was one of the few people in power she said didn't treat her like a slave which they are and the series makes clear. It also highlights the danger of a hydra and shows u their power and how cruel this world can be. Is it sad yes, was she cute yes but I though the death was well handled and fitting that it was Nora who sacrificed herself.
 
@ParagonNight She didn't sacrifice herself defending him, Mc was already behind cover. She just got wiped by a laser out of nowhere.
It does a good job of cementing the world as "real" and that our mc himself isn't all powerful, but it also absolutely doesn't fit the manga's mood. This isn't game of thrones, it's a manga about an isekai'd veterinarian.
They also immediately go back to the manga's mood, just calmly bantering about what to do 23 seconds after their friend got obliterated off the map.
 
There was no fucking reason why they had to fight this hydra, now was there?
They could have just sealed the entrance or poured more oil into it like the first time.
Instead they decided to create a cave in on the spot and look where that got them.
 
@AxeBurningfire I will concede that it doesn't fit the mood and I wont argue on that point. However people complaining its stupid and bad story telling have no ground. Idk I just get irritated when people conflate their opinions and try to justify their dislike by saying something is bad writing when it s not and simply a matter of personal taste or not appropriate to the story.
 
ah yes, the obligatory "secondary character who's supposed to be a friend dies bc some reason to make the world more menacing"
 
...can you make actual fucking sense. The hell are you babbling about with all that talking. Just say if we're fighting or not.

Too much time wasted on having a full essay of dialogue.

Too much effort wasted into trying to check off a list of emotions the protagonist is going to rush through instead of thoroughly digest.

Too much nakama wasted. Oh look how he's relying on everyone, it's like they're a real tight team that trust and rely on each other. Team work guys-uggh.

The story doesn't even care. Doesn't even care about the bastardized ideologies it's trying to shove down our throats in the span of minutes. It just wants the Technicality Rights under its belt. "Our protagonist had an emotion, he really cares about the people he works with, he fights together with them as a team, he's really brave despite being normal, we make good story". Argh!
 

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