Juuyoku no Chigiri - Vol. 1 Ch. 6

[MangaDex]

 

[shaedyhoe]

Well this was fucking painful. Beautiful. But yet, extremely painful.

 

[Sadrobot]

Disappointing in every way possible.
The revelations were like a magician pulling rabbits out of his hat to impress easily fooled little kiddos. Nothing more. Melodramatic to no end, borderline cringe without properly building a bond reader - characters. That’s why the ending felt empty. I had no compassion whatsoever for either of them.

It’s a flop for me.

 

[camelleon]

@Sadrobot thank you for materialized what i also feel.

I think the author knows the plot point that they want to write, but not necessarily know how to develop and utilize them fully.

 

[cindergrave]

that's gonna be a fckin yikes from me, dawg.

horrible twist. horrible ending. no emotional weight. just seems edgy for the sake of being edgy. just... bad.

 

[mikeneko0095]

WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK JUST HAPPENED?

 

[Sadrobot]

@camelleon Exactly!!
I was thinking that the story isnt bad in itself, rather it could’ve been pretty good. But the way the author unraveled it is so poorly done. Oh well, *sigh*